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== Article Evaluation ==

Jimmy_Wales
This article presented no bias and was very neutral. The claim about Wikipedia becoming "the worlds largest encyclopedia" was cited as were other major facts throughout the page. The links worked, however many of them were linked back to other Wikipedia pages and websites. One thing to note was that the article was very organized and full of detailed information regarding Jim Wales and his life. There were several links such as https://www.fastcompany.com/59260/why-man-smiling that added credible information to bolster the claims made in the article. This article was a B class article.

Research
When reading this article I had found the link: https://books.google.com/books?id=oFFWt5oyA3oC&pg=PA178&dq=%22original+research%22&lr=&cd=90#v=onepage&q=%22original%20research%22&f=false to bring the reader to a page that was not a valid source of citation, rather a link to buying a book on google. This article is listed as a level 4 vital article Talk: Research.

Gzaf21 (talk) 13:11, 12 April 2018 (UTC)

Disney's Fairy Tale Weddings & Honeymoons
I would like to add more information and topics to this stub. it does not have a lot of information presented. I was able to add some links, however, there could be some content gaps in the information that was presented in the article. For this article i added some small changes to be reviewed in the talk section. I saw potential plagiarism in this article and posted that this should be further reviewed.

Riverside Amusement park (chicago):
"This article needs an entire page. I would be able to create a whole page with multiple sections on this topic. The one problem I am running into with this topic is the fact that I cannot find the name of the amusement park online. When I search in google it provides me with information on Riverview park, and there is already a page for that on wikipedia."

Battle Creek River:
This is a page about the Michigan river called Battle Creek. This page needs added context, and a division of ideas under categorical headings.

Echinacea serotina:
Needs a picture and more information about origin. This is an article about the medicinal plant and its properties. I would be able to add more on what disorders or conditions would be helped from this plant.

Farmer's lung:
Add a section on diagnoses. I would like to work on this page because there is so much room for improvement. I would like to review the page further for content gaps. Also, I would like to add a picture of the condition.

Bibliography for potential articles to supplement:
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2306727/?page=1 Epidemiology of Farmers Lung Disease:

The growth of mold spores occurs when hay is not dried properly. The growth of these mold spores accumulates over time and will infect the host upon release from the source. When in the air, the farmer may inhale the particles and induce an allergic reaction. The hay at risk for increased volumes of spores are the bottom found at the bottom of the pile. The presence of Farmer's Lung Disease peaks during late winter and early spring and is mostly seen after the harvest season when symptoms have set in. This disease is most prevalent in damp climates.

http://pubs.ext.vt.edu/content/dam/pubs_ext_vt_edu/442/442-602/442-602_pdf.pdf Acute Stage: After four to eight hours symptoms such as headache, irritating cough, and shortness of breath upon physical exertion, appear.

Subacute Stage: Symptoms persist without further exposure, and increase in severity. Symptoms include: shortness of breath upon exertion, chronic coughing, physical weakness, occasional fever and sweating, decrease in appetite, aches and pains.

Chronic Stage: Debilitating effects are now considered long-term. Symptoms include: severe shortness of breath, chronic coughing, physical weakness, occasional fever and sweating at night, decrease in appetite, and general aches and pains.

"Study Data from University Hospital Provide New Insights into Respiratory Research." Obesity, Fitness & Wellness Week, 9 July 2011, p. 2854. Academic OneFile, http://link.galegroup.com/apps/doc/A260626348/AONE?u=cod_lrc&sid=AONE&xid=a916f801. Accessed 18 Apr. 2018. The handling of farming materials such as animal feed, hay, or straw presents an increased risk for respiratory problems. http://journal.chestnet.org/article/S0012-3692(15)33783-1/fulltext Diagnoses of Farmer's lung is difficult due to its similarity to cold and flu-like symptoms. Doctors diagnose patients with Farmer's lung under the following conditions:


 * Patient exhibit a clinical history of symptoms such as cough, fever, and labored breathing when exposed to mold in work environment.
 * The presence of diffuse lung disease in chronic cases.
 * Presentation of antibodies when exposed to thermophilic Actinomyctes.

Examination procedures may include:

• taking a blood test

• taking a chest x-ray

• administering a breathing capacity test

• administering an inhalation challenge

• examining lung tissue

• performing an immunological investigation

• performing a lung function test

• reviewing your clinical history http://nasdonline.org/1654/d001538/farmer-039-s-lung-it-takes-your-breath.html Permanent lung damage can arise due to one's inability to recognize the cause of symptoms. Farmer's lung occurs because repeated exposure to antigens, found in the mold spores of hay, crops, and animal feed, triggers an allergic reaction within the farmer's immune system. The defense mechanisms of the body present as cold and flu-like symptoms that occur in individuals who experience either acute or chronic reactions. Farmers Lung Disease is permanent and cannot be reversed, therefore in order to prevent the onset of further stages, farmers should inform their doctor of their occupation and if they have mold in their work environment.

Prevention of this respiratory illness can be facilitated through the ventilation of work areas, drying of materials, and the use of a mask when working in confined areas with moldy hay or crops. https://www.epainassist.com/chest-pain/lungs/farmers-lung