User:Gzycc/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Tommy Shelby

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because Tommy Shelby is the main character in a Netflix series that I enjoy thoroughly.

Evaluate the article
In the introduction to Tommy there should be more about his business and family, both which play a huge role in his life.

series one talk more about not just fixing horse races but the Shelby company bookmaking.

Series one should include where Tommy finds out that Grace is the reason that Campbell finds the guns

Series three story line gets mixed up

series four leaves out Lizzie being pregnant with Tommys baby

series 4 and 5 should include more about Arthurs struggles with his wife

All the links seems to work.