User:H2lam/Ageism/Christby1005 Peer Review

General info
H2lam
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:H2lam/Ageism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ageism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The review of the article is really good as it provides additional explanation to ageism in workplace in the section of Employment in the original article. The added paragraph to the section successfully holds the article's focus on the society's discrimination to older people with a professional tone and easy-to-understand explanation style.

The source that the review used is also very credible as two of them are from Journal of the American Society on Aging and the other is from an authoritative scholar in the field of study. The use of credible sources strength the claim of the author and makes readers convinced by the arguments of the article.