User:H2lam/Ageism/Erickgulyan Peer Review

General info
H2lam
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:H2lam/Ageism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ageism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft article is well written and has much key information relating to ageism which was helpful to hear.

The key problem you're trying to solve is that there wasn't enough citations on the original Ageism page for the information about US and Philipines, which I believe you are solving by adding the data about the rise of ageism in America and how it impacts people.

In the last paragraph of your draft, I would say that some of the quotes go on for too long and can get fairly difficult to keep the reader's attention. Also, you concluded the paragraph with "They are also paid a lower minimum wage and not allowed to work full-time.; however, this statement could really use some sources to support it. Otherwise, I feel you have a strong article and best of luck!