User:H2lam/Ageism/Mingyili009 Peer Review

General info
H2lam
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:H2lam/Ageism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ageism
 * Ageism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good feedback on the original article with an intention to extend different countries' responses to Ageism.

Employment section: discussed how ageism is not limited to older adults, but also children, teenagers, and young women. Could provide a summary about the current/common definition of ageism, and what are some extended concepts.

Age discrimination section: very detailed and well-explained section. It contains valid resources and proper citations. Could establish more connections to ageism at the beginning: how is retirement age related to ageism? Some citations of '(p. 3), (p. 31)' are not linked well, but overall, very impressive work!