User:H3lic0pter44/Yiddishist movement/Gkat86 Peer Review

General info
I'm reviewing H3lic0pter44's group's work on the Yiddish Movement article.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:H3lic0pter44/Yiddishist movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Yiddishist movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The drafted changes significantly improve the language, content, and reliability of the article, by adding new sections, flushing out language, and adding new sources. The Lead section is thoroughly written, the language is neutral, and seems comprehensive of the topic. The additions to the YIVO section clarify the formations of Yiddish organizations both in the US and globally, as well as explain how Yiddish has survived as a language today. Furthermore, the addition of the Zionist perspective on Yiddish being adopted as national language is important for understanding the complex relationship between the revivals of the Yiddish and Hebrew languages, especially as Hebrew grew tremendously with the establishment of Israel. From my research on my project, I could suggest the description of other Yiddish media sources in the US section, such as Yiddish radio programs and other newspapers and publications, as well as the referencing of the International Jewish Labor Bund, which promoted Yiddish language and eastern Jewish culture.