User:H3lic0pter44/Yiddishist movement/Saouad05 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * H3licopter44
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:H3lic0pter44/Yiddishist movement:

Evaluate the drafted changes
-The article has a clear, concise lead in that descibes what kind of movement Yiddishism is and who the founders are. There could be more information added on the core values and goals of Yiddishism. The lead could also include a brief description of the article's main sections.

-The section of the article about the origins is very specific and comprehensive. It provides context for the history of Yiddishist movement as well as reasons why Yiddish was not originally supported.

-The Czernowitz Conference section details an important development in the Yiddishist Movement. The section does a good job of explaining why the conference took place, who attended, what they hoped to achieved, and what resulted from the conference.

The section about Contemporary Yiddishism connects the Yiddish Movement back to today well. It describes how and where Yiddish is alive today.

-The content added is neutral very detailed. It does not over represent a viewpoint more than the other or attempt to convince readers of one viewpoint. I did not find any spelling or grammatical errors.

- They clearly state that the references from the original article did not copy over into the sandbox and that their own contributions were cited.

-The article could use some more images.

-It follows the pattern of similar articles. The order of the content works well, and overall the article is well organized.

-The group did a good job of editing the original article to provide more detail and clarity on the topic.