User:H3lpful4all779/Humanitarian aid/Mailesittler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

H3lpful4all779


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:H3lpful4all779/Humanitarian_aid?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Humanitarian aid

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your edits are very descriptive and well written. They match the style of writing used throughout the rest of article and maintain a neutral perspective. Additionally, your edits are very well organized. Maybe be a little careful when using phrases such as "it became apparent" and minimizing jargon or unnecessary wording that may detract from a factual tone. Although the sources that you include are substantial, your edits for this section could benefit from more sourcing as to not be cited for plagiarism. For example, your 'limitations' section could benefit from more sourcing placed throughout the two paragraphs pertaining to where you acquired the information on organizations acting as competitors, etc. The information is concise and well situated within the rest of the article. Overall, you did an amazing job with your edits and won't have too many more edits to make going forward! It sounds great and definitely checks off the boxes within the review framework.