User:H3lpful4all779/International non-governmental organization/Mailesittler Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

H3lpful4all779


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:H3lpful4all779/International_non-governmental_organization?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * International non-governmental organization

Evaluate the drafted changes
Considering the existing organization of the article --which is somewhat incomplete/sparse--, your choices to further expand the history section and criticisms are great! You do keep a neutral tone throughout your edits and give an explanation as to what International non-governmental organizations do, which the article was lacking previously. It may be wise to update the lead section of the article to account for the edits you plan to make in the preceding body of the article. Additionally maybe in your section on criticisms it may be useful to include an example of the inefficacy of organizations that are working to solve the same problem. It also be be helpful to include more sources in your history section such as where you got information for sections such as "governments began privatizing various sectors beyond state-involved international.." The sources you do have are current and the organization of the article is well thought out. The article overall sounds more complete and the content is very relevant to the topic. You did an excellent job linking this article to other articles. Good job!