User:HHAMMAD2/African cuisine/Liyuabel2003 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HHAMMAD2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * African cuisine


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African Cusine

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Key aspects seem great and clearly well thought out. I would add some personal favorties of yours for the cusinse and bring up the flavors and how differnt populations like it or how it links to other cultures within Africa. I think this is relavent, although I do not see any new edits. I feel there are more countries that could be spoken about. Also the title is not very intriguing. Everything seems very essential and looks well sourced and not plagerised.

Maybe expand more on other countries you feel were not talked about. Images look great and very authentic.