User:HJKwiki12345/Socialist Republic of Chile/Dancer2025!! Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) HJKwiki12345


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HJKwiki12345/Socialist_Republic_of_Chile?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Socialist Republic of Chile

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So, the background information that you add is useful and helpful but remember to add your sources.

You mentioned that you used two sources but we should use a minimum of three. The content is related to your topic. You didn't add any new images but I would say that the images already in the article look good enough that you don't need to.

The article does have links to other sources which does add to the level of understanding.

In what you wrote you mention a "military junta" I don't know what that is. If it is a more vague term you might want to add Brackets that clarify this.I didn't notice any major spelling errors but just in case I missed anything I would put it through a grammar.

You do a good Job of staying neutral which is important, when you include your sources I would make sure that they are neutral sources. I assume they are but just in case.

The way that the stuff you added looks in the sand box is hard to tell how it will be organized in the article but just make sure that it is organized in an order that makes sense.