User:HJKwiki12345/Socialist Republic of Chile/Swiftluvr222 Peer Review

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 * Socialist Republic of Chile

Evaluate the drafted changes
The draft gives a good background on constitutional reform throughout the 1920s in Chile. The first paragraph about the Constitution of 1925 gives a background that the original Wikipedia article does not cover. There were some names listed throughout the draft, like Carlos Ibanez for example, that I did not recognize at first and I think it would be helpful to maybe add some general background to the important figures listed. There was a sentence in the draft that says that Carlos Ibanez maneuvered his way back into power- was he in power before? The original article does state who he is, but it is in a section that the author will be removing. Therefore, it may be helpful to add some background as to who he is before describing his rise back into power.

Most of what can be improved will come with more elaboration that I'm sure will come with the final draft. If there are sources on this available, it could be helpful to add information on what happened after President Ibanez resigned and fled. It could be helpful to provide a small summary of what happened to Chile after the president fled.

Overall the draft is in good shape, it just needs some expanding that will come with the final draft.