User:HLPickard/Delicatessen (1991 film)/LofgrenSFSUenglish465 Peer Review

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 * User:HLPickard/Delicatessen (1991 film)


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Peer Review:

Hey, really good job on Wikipedia so far. Your additions to the plot section are perfect. They make the plot so much easier to understand for me. You outline the characters beautifully.

Some tips:

1. You wrote in your notes to include themes of patriarchy, and authoritarianism. If you can find sources that mention this, I think including these kinds of things in your article is a really good idea.

2. Expanding the sections to include themes, styles, settings, characters, historical significance, etc might help the article.

3. The sources you found are great, maybe finding two or three more sources to expand on. You have a great start though.

4. Have any newspapers critiqued the film? Find any positive or negative reviews from qualified sources?

5. The receptions section is well done, but could be expanded upon.

Good job so far, what you have is very well done - I guess my main advice is to hunt down a couple more sources to expand upon what you're already doing, and possibly add a thematic section or a historical significance section if you find sources that mention those kinds of things. LofgrenSFSUenglish465 (talk) 04:38, 15 April 2021 (UTC)