User:HLPickard/Delicatessen (1991 film)/Ytan11sf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HLPickard


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HLPickard/Delicatessen_(1991_film)?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Delicatessen_(1991_film)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: A short summary (1/2 sentence long) of the plot/setting might be a good addition as it is the major section of the article.

Content: The content added is relevant. The author expanded the plot summary and added many details accomplishing a better overview of the film. In the Reception, the added is relevant to the content but might not necessary belongs to Wikipedia.

Tone and Balance: The content is neutral and does not show sign of bias nor persuasion.

Source and Reference: The source seems to be reliable and peer reviewed.

Organization: In my personal opinion, the author might want to consider to use more conjunction to make the paragraphs more coherent.

Overall: The article is good, but the author might want consider adding more content to the article.