User:HSCI3423 - Student/Charles Nicolle/CBrown405 Peer Review

Lead:5

Content:5

Tone/Balance:5

Sources/References:5

Organization:5

Very well done and put together. I think you are well on your way to having a major contribution to this page and your citations are clean. Well done, the flow is correct and I am impressed with the accomplishments section you added. Maybe add a photo but there is already one in the original article so whatever you choose is fine.

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