User:HSCI3423 - Student/Charles Nicolle/Mmp2818 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(HSCI3423)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HSCI3423 - Student/Charles Nicolle


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Charles Nicolle

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Sources are reliable and ensure that accurate information is being presented.

The article covers the topic in great detail. The article is not persuasive in any way, and it is very factual.

The content is clear and easy to read. The content is broken down in sections, which makes it easier to view.

The section titled "Studies and Career" is a little long. It might be more visually appealing if you could find a way to divide this section and add another heading.