User:HYang2024/Inclusive design/Polovinnak Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HYang 2024


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HYang2024/Inclusive_design?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The Lead includes a concise introductory sentence and introduces readers to the article's topics well. However, the Lead does not clearly state or briefly describe the major article sections. The lead does include the information present in the article and summarizes it well. The Lead is well written and it is concise.

Content


 * The content in the article is related to the topic of the article and is up-to-date.
 * The content relates to a topic underrepresented in Wikipedia.

Tone and Balance


 * The content added has a natural tone and is not biased
 * I do think that for an increase neutrality, the article should have an extended History section

Sources and References


 * The article contains a sufficient amount of reliable sources
 * The article does however include very few footnotes
 * The sources have a sufficient diversification of authors

Organization


 * The content is clear and concise
 * The content is grammatically well written and correct
 * The content is well organized and broken down into sections

Images and Media


 * The article does not include any images


 * The article meets the Notability requirements