User:Haakad1/Citizenship (Amendment) Act, 2019/PranavRamesh2478 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Haakad1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haakad1/Citizenship_%28Amendment%29_Act%2C_2019?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Citizenship (Amendment) Act, 2019

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft is very well written. It follows the wikipedia format guidelines and adds substantial context to the article by discussing how protests against the CAA also progressed in the "cyber-realm" of social media. I think that your writing does a great job in maintaining a neutral balanced tone that reports the facts of the situations. Your references are properly linked and everything is thoroughly cited. The second block of contributions you wrote flows very very well in the context of the article, as you are bringing in the international implications of the world seeing police brutality against the protesters. Maybe one thing you might consider adding is more of the details behind the international community's reactions to the protests to beef up the last paragraph. However, it's genuinely hard to give critical feedback because I believe your contributions are well placed, well thought out and well written. Overall, amazing job!