User:Habdulbaki/Dying/Belvedere123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Habdulbaki, Pardeep8, CS-UCSF


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dying


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I feel as though the article was well organized, the title was short simple and to the point. The first sentence did a great job of laying out the topic and was presented in a way that most levels of health literacy would understand. I thought incorporating other cultures perspectives was inclusive and provided a very interesting perspective. Overall, I feel like the article presented in a way that was neutral, scientific, and well digestible for the general population.