User:Habtcnj/Homework/Moralej2 Peer Review

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User:Habtcnj
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Habtcnj/Homework
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Homework

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sentence you edited sounds grammatically correct and is easily understandable for your reader. Perhaps you should consider finding more reliable sources to make further revisions. Furthermore, I believe the article would benefit from a rearrangement of the information's order. For example, I believe "The History of Homework" would be better placed immediately after the lead. By placing this heading after the lead, it will provide the reader with a better introduction to the topic. Additionally, the lead also requires some revisions. It fails to provide the reader with a concise summary of the article's contents.