User:Hadasam/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
McDonald's advertising

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is interesting to learn about companies advertisement. McDonald's is a global company and people have to have the correct history of it. At first glance, I thought the article was clear and concise.

Evaluate the article
The McDonald's advertising article provides a good introduction and an overview in the first two sentences. The reader has an overview and can get an idea of what the article is about. The Introductory sentence could be better since it doesn't give specific details. The introduction seems to have a brief explanation and facts about McDonald's advertising. The article overall seems to have information of many of the aspects of McDonald's advertising.

The article content is relevant to the topic. The article talks about different aspects like McDonalds history, McDonalds starting place (India), controversial times McDonald has encountered, racial diversity, McDonalds present day campaign and cross promotions. The article is mostly up to date but could include more facts. I think the content is good overall but could include more information in McDonald's history and McDonald's current campaign.

The article is from a neutral point of view. They are not claims that are heavily biased or biased at all. I would say some of the viewpoint or facts that are under presented is McDonalds History.The article could give more information about McDonalds history. Fringe points are described as such.This article does not attempt to persuade the reader to any point of view on the topic.

All the facts are backed up and represent availability. The sources are written by a spectrum of authors. It includes history of the company. The article has good information available however, the article could include more information and sources.It could talk about the different slogans and campaigns over the years and include this sources. The links work and redirect us to the source.

The article is well written and very easy to read. It does not have grammatical errors. The article is divided into sections according to what the reader is looking for.The article is  organized to reflect the points of the topic.

The article does not include any images and that is something that the article is missing. The article should include at least a logo image.

The talk page does not have much information or discussions. There is one statement of including more information in some sections. There is also people that updated the links.

The article overall status is good but it should include more information in some sections and images so that the readers have a visual picture of the logo or slogan. of the company. The articles strength are that it gives good information about different aspects and the reader can be well informed about the companies advertisement and overall history.The article could be improved by adding more information in some sections and images. The article is well developed overall.