User:Hadis07/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Material culture
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * The lead section is done well and does not seem to need any editing apart from an inclusion of the topics/major sections that follow and also some need of citing
 * Content
 * Content is relevant however needs to be more fleshed out in some topics such as Archaeology, Sociology and History as there is plenty of content that can be added here
 * Some of the information provided in Contributors could be deemed as irrelevant as it more goes into their personal history, also due to the fact this section is comparatively larger than the others
 * This is where i'd like to include the communicational aspect of material culture
 * Tone and Balance
 * Tone and balance of article seems to be neutral
 * Sources and References
 * Sources are credible but as mentioned before more sources could be used in the lead section
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Writing could be more concise in parts such as in the Contributors section, however, no spelling or grammar errors seem to be present
 * Organizational aspect of the article is well composed and works injunction with the images
 * Images and Media
 * Images have been used well with captions and cited properly
 * Talk page discussion
 * Talk page discussion is not active, however, another user agrees with my judgement in that the lead section needs more references
 * Overall impressions
 * The overall impression the article gives off is good but it needs majorly developing as the images play a large part in the appeal of the article
 * Sources
 * Roth, Klaus (2001-10-01). "Material culture and intercultural communication". International Journal of Intercultural Relations. 25 (5): 563–580. doi :10.1016/S0147-1767(01)00023-2. ISSN 0147-1767.
 * Woodward, Ian (2007). Understanding material culture. Los Angeles: Sage Publications. ISBN 1-84860-726-1. OCLC 671655018. P
 * Sources
 * Roth, Klaus (2001-10-01). "Material culture and intercultural communication". International Journal of Intercultural Relations. 25 (5): 563–580. doi :10.1016/S0147-1767(01)00023-2. ISSN 0147-1767.
 * Woodward, Ian (2007). Understanding material culture. Los Angeles: Sage Publications. ISBN 1-84860-726-1. OCLC 671655018. P
 * Woodward, Ian (2007). Understanding material culture. Los Angeles: Sage Publications. ISBN 1-84860-726-1. OCLC 671655018. P
 * Woodward, Ian (2007). Understanding material culture. Los Angeles: Sage Publications. ISBN 1-84860-726-1. OCLC 671655018. P

Option 2

 * Media blackout
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * The lead section needs to be further developed as it is only short and lacks a introduction to the other sections that will be presented in the article.
 * It also lacks any citation
 * Content
 * Content is relevant apart from the section that refers to a media blackout in association soccer
 * Content could be more fleshed out and include more citations
 * Some media blackout examples are questionable as they more pertain to celebrities/royals.
 * Would like to see reference to more recent current day media blackouts and the evolution of this in a more digital world
 * Tone and Balance
 * Tone seems neutral
 * Sources and References
 * Needs a lot more sources
 * Use of academic sources would improve the article
 * Paywall on some sources
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Some grammar mistakes
 * Needs more content to be better structured
 * Images and Media
 * Only one image
 * Caption is adequate
 * Talk page discussion
 * Previous content in particular media blackout examples have been removed
 * Small group of people editing the article
 * Overall impressions
 * The overall impression of the article is that its lacking a lot of content and has room for improvement
 * Sources
 * "Blackouts: a brief history". Journalism Cases from Canada. Retrieved 2022-02-06.
 * "Social Media Blackouts Are an Authoritarian Power Move". American Civil Liberties Union. Retrieved 2022-02-06.
 * Sources
 * "Blackouts: a brief history". Journalism Cases from Canada. Retrieved 2022-02-06.
 * "Social Media Blackouts Are an Authoritarian Power Move". American Civil Liberties Union. Retrieved 2022-02-06.
 * "Social Media Blackouts Are an Authoritarian Power Move". American Civil Liberties Union. Retrieved 2022-02-06.

Option 3

 * Exformation
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * The lead section provides a brief synopsis of what exformation is and who who coined the term
 * Lacks reference to the upcoming section on the article
 * Content
 * Content is limited
 * Only provides one example and the proposed meaning by Nørretranders
 * Could be more concise
 * Tone and Balance
 * Tone could definitely be upgraded as it seems a little rudimentary
 * Sources and References
 * No references whatsoever
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Some grammatical mistakes
 * Needs more content to be organized properly
 * Not concise enough
 * Images and Media
 * No images
 * Talk page discussion
 * Only one person has used the talk page
 * Overall impressions
 * The overall impression of the article is poor as there is not enough content and no references
 * Sources
 * Severs, Jeffrey (2017), Tavel Clarke, Michael; Wittenberg, David (eds.), "Cutting Consciousness Down to Size: David Foster Wallace, Exformation, and the Scale of Encyclopedic Fiction", Scale in Literature and Culture, Cham: Springer International Publishing, pp. 281–303, doi :10.1007/978-3-319-64242-0_11, ISBN 978-3-319-64241-3 , retrieved 2022-02-06
 * Sources
 * Severs, Jeffrey (2017), Tavel Clarke, Michael; Wittenberg, David (eds.), "Cutting Consciousness Down to Size: David Foster Wallace, Exformation, and the Scale of Encyclopedic Fiction", Scale in Literature and Culture, Cham: Springer International Publishing, pp. 281–303, doi :10.1007/978-3-319-64242-0_11, ISBN 978-3-319-64241-3 , retrieved 2022-02-06
 * Severs, Jeffrey (2017), Tavel Clarke, Michael; Wittenberg, David (eds.), "Cutting Consciousness Down to Size: David Foster Wallace, Exformation, and the Scale of Encyclopedic Fiction", Scale in Literature and Culture, Cham: Springer International Publishing, pp. 281–303, doi :10.1007/978-3-319-64242-0_11, ISBN 978-3-319-64241-3 , retrieved 2022-02-06
 * Severs, Jeffrey (2017), Tavel Clarke, Michael; Wittenberg, David (eds.), "Cutting Consciousness Down to Size: David Foster Wallace, Exformation, and the Scale of Encyclopedic Fiction", Scale in Literature and Culture, Cham: Springer International Publishing, pp. 281–303, doi :10.1007/978-3-319-64242-0_11, ISBN 978-3-319-64241-3 , retrieved 2022-02-06

Option 4

 * Commercial character design
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * There is only a definition presented in the lead section
 * No introductory information
 * No reference to other topics in the article
 * Content
 * There is only two topics: Design process and Well known designers
 * Content is lacking
 * Tone and Balance
 * Tone is neutral
 * Sources and References
 * No sources or references
 * Content definitely needs citing
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Not enough content to organize
 * Writing is concise
 * Images and Media
 * No images
 * Would be a good article to have images to show the design of certain characters
 * Talk page discussion
 * No one has used talk page
 * Article was created as part of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment by a student
 * Overall impressions
 * The overall impression of the article is poor as the content is extremely lacking
 * Sources
 * Chen, Cheih-Ying; Zhunag, Xu-Qin (2015). Antona, Margherita; Stephanidis, Constantine (eds.). "Visual Communication of Lovely Characters in Digital Development Arena". Universal Access in Human-Computer Interaction. Access to Today's Technologies . Lecture Notes in Computer Science. Cham: Springer International Publishing: 397–405. doi :10.1007/978-3-319-20678-3_38. ISBN 978-3-319-20678-3.
 * Ferreira, António Manuel Rodrigues, et al. “Communication Through Character Design: ‘Inside Out’ Case Study.” Perspective on Design, Springer International Publishing, 2019, pp. 203–11, https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-030-32415-5_15.
 * Sources
 * Chen, Cheih-Ying; Zhunag, Xu-Qin (2015). Antona, Margherita; Stephanidis, Constantine (eds.). "Visual Communication of Lovely Characters in Digital Development Arena". Universal Access in Human-Computer Interaction. Access to Today's Technologies . Lecture Notes in Computer Science. Cham: Springer International Publishing: 397–405. doi :10.1007/978-3-319-20678-3_38. ISBN 978-3-319-20678-3.
 * Ferreira, António Manuel Rodrigues, et al. “Communication Through Character Design: ‘Inside Out’ Case Study.” Perspective on Design, Springer International Publishing, 2019, pp. 203–11, https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-030-32415-5_15.
 * Chen, Cheih-Ying; Zhunag, Xu-Qin (2015). Antona, Margherita; Stephanidis, Constantine (eds.). "Visual Communication of Lovely Characters in Digital Development Arena". Universal Access in Human-Computer Interaction. Access to Today's Technologies . Lecture Notes in Computer Science. Cham: Springer International Publishing: 397–405. doi :10.1007/978-3-319-20678-3_38. ISBN 978-3-319-20678-3.
 * Ferreira, António Manuel Rodrigues, et al. “Communication Through Character Design: ‘Inside Out’ Case Study.” Perspective on Design, Springer International Publishing, 2019, pp. 203–11, https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-030-32415-5_15.
 * Ferreira, António Manuel Rodrigues, et al. “Communication Through Character Design: ‘Inside Out’ Case Study.” Perspective on Design, Springer International Publishing, 2019, pp. 203–11, https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-030-32415-5_15.

Option 5

 * Deviancy amplification spiral
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead Section
 * The lead section only provides a definition and doesn't have any introductory information or outline any topics in the article
 * Lead section however is concise
 * Content
 * Content is limited to Origin of term and Process
 * More content is needed
 * Examples could be used
 * Content could be kept up to date by comparing media previously to media now in the context of the deviancy amplification spiral
 * Tone and Balance
 * Tone is neutral
 * Nothing to balance as there is not enough content
 * Sources and References
 * There could be more references along with content
 * Some references do not show where they are cited in the text
 * Organization and writing quality
 * Organization is fine but limited due to content
 * Some of the content could be smoother and more concise
 * Images and Media
 * There is no images
 * Images could be used to make the page more aesthetically pleasing
 * Talk page discussion
 * Some people have used the talk page
 * No one seems to be actively editing the page
 * Overall impressions
 * Overall impression is underwhelming as the content is lacking in many areas
 * The article needs much more material in terms of references
 * Sources
 * Wood, Mark A. (2016-04-17). "Antisocial media and algorithmic deviancy amplification: Analysing the id of Facebook's technological unconscious". Theoretical Criminology. 21 (2): 168–185. doi :10.1177/1362480616643382. ISSN 1362-4806.
 * Sources
 * Wood, Mark A. (2016-04-17). "Antisocial media and algorithmic deviancy amplification: Analysing the id of Facebook's technological unconscious". Theoretical Criminology. 21 (2): 168–185. doi :10.1177/1362480616643382. ISSN 1362-4806.
 * Wood, Mark A. (2016-04-17). "Antisocial media and algorithmic deviancy amplification: Analysing the id of Facebook's technological unconscious". Theoretical Criminology. 21 (2): 168–185. doi :10.1177/1362480616643382. ISSN 1362-4806.