User:Haeli Edwards/MeToo movement/Kendall16C Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Haelie Edwards


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haeli%20Edwards/MeToo_movement/Kendall16C_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * MeToo movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It is 11:15 am on Sunday (3/19) I am currently about to leave to a doctors appointment, and then have work from 2pm-9pm and there is nothing for me to peer review.