User:Hagerjm/Evaluate an Article

-Comments:
-Poor and or basic wording in much of the article that needs to be improved.

-Historical priorities are misplaced (e.g. the idea that the capitalists opposed the strikes mainly because of gender roles).

-Incorrect framing: the idea that the first strike wasn't successful but then lists the initial compromises by the capitalists gained by the workers.

-Comments:
-Poorly arranged (full links at the beginning of paragraphs)

-Specificity in sources needed (lots of "page needed" in citations)

-Comments:
-The first paragraph buries the lead, that much of the organization of this was due to the efforts of the Communist Party, and it rather takes an identity based rather than class approach. This criticism is not a personal bias, but a reflection of the actual events, since the CP was multi-racial and it was not only black Chicagoans protesting, but a working class fight.

-It has a good background section, especially going into the Unemployment Council and the scale of CP organizing in the city.

-Good at showing the delineation of organizations like the Chicago Tribune.