User:Hailey8405/A Voice from the South/Cmccaid.paul Peer Review

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Hailey provided more information about the book entitled "Voice From the South", such as how many parts it's divided into, and what each section discusses/contains. The lead is concise and relevant. The article is very organized and easy to follow. Each paragraph beneath the Summary section pertains to one of the four essays in the novel. The information provided is neutral and unbiased. In other words, there are no opinions made by the writer, only facts or observations supported with citations. I noticed few grammar errors, but made edits/changes as I read. Hailey accurately and appropriately uses three references to prove what she is writing is true. Overall, the content added has improved the quality of the article and it reads much more complete now. The content added provides a stronger analysis of each essay in "Voice from the South." Great job!