User:Haileyab/Joe Hisaishi/Hayward 24 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Haileyab


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Haileyab/Joe_Hisaishi?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Joe Hisaishi

Evaluate the drafted changes
After the article I believe that the writer has a strong understanding of Wikipedia, the way to write using Wikipedia. The draft change I believe would add information to the article about Joe Hisaishi. The way that the writer was able to apply this to the article was through the use of stats and clarity. The writer also clearly used neutral information nonbiased. going through the references and sources the writer made sure to use reliable sources and portray the information from the references accurately. All around I personally don't see anything that i would change I believe that the information presented will add to the article and the information doesn't break any Wikipedia violations.