User:Hailrain/Mattiwilda Dobbs/LexReview Peer Review

General info
Hailrain
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?diff=1183022647&oldid=1177291676&title=Mattiwilda_Dobbs
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mattiwilda Dobbs

Evaluate the drafted changes
The information you have added has worked well. The only thing I would say to do is check grammar throughout the article. It looks great, I like the stuff you have done so far.