User:Hailrain/Mattiwilda Dobbs/Siblemn0 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits that you provided are useful and detailed. For example, you added to the previously written sentence, "becoming the first African American singer to perform in a romantic role. Adding this detail to the sentence allows for the reader to better understand Mattiwilda's important role.