User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China/Dandelion1984 Peer Review

General info
Haiyili222
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT history in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits you made seem appropriate and more specific than the original article, which provides clarity. Everything you added so far is relevant to the topic and not distracting. Some of the information you added also adds more nuance to the article, such as "he first recorded gay and lesbian community began to develop in the early 1990s in Beijing, however due to the reason that homosexuality was a relatively sensitive topic, most of LGBTQ communities remained underground or semi-public to avoid police investigation. The introduction of the internet in 1998 allowed for a convenient medium for LGBT activists to connect and communicate through online connection. Online chatrooms allowed a space for LGBTQ members to contact and develop connections. were a great resource for grassroots LGBT organizations." While the information you included is very timely, I think a citation is necessary here.

Looking at the original article, I, too, thought the censorship on LGBTQ groups in China section was under-represented, so I appreciate your addition to that section.

A lot of the statements still seem to be missing citations that could back them up, is that something you are planning on doing later?

For example: "An internet survey in 2000 showed that Chinese people are becoming more tolerant towards homosexuality: among the 10,792 surveyed, 48.15% were in favor, 30.9% disapproved, 14.46% were uncertain, and 7.26% were indifferent." This statement involves very specific stats, which calls for a citation.