User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China/Willa Wei Peer Review

General info
Haiyili222
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT history in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good job Lee! I love that you added the section on homosexuality during China's cultural revolution and censorship of LGBTQ content in the public sphere. It's great that everything you added in this wiki article is relevant to the article topic, and everything you added is neutral. Your references do a good job of supporting the ideas in this wiki article. However, I noticed that most of the references you used were from news reports, since I do not know some of these news agencies very well, I am not sure if they are reliable. It will be great if you can check it. Also, it's great that all the sources you used were published in 2023. I also noticed that you have some grammatical errors that would be nice to correct.