User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China/Yifancai Peer Review

General info
Haiyili222
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Haiyili222/LGBT history in China
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):LGBT history in China

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead has been updated to reflect the new content added by Lee. She did not include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article’s topic. The Lead does not include a brief description of the article’s major sections but includes information that is not present in the article. And the Lead is vague.

The content added is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. The article deals with one of Wikipedia’s equity gaps and addresses topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics. There is no claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position.

There are no viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented. The content added does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another.