User:Haleyferraris/Environmental effects of aviation/Fcatauro Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this topic is very interesting and the contributions that they made to this article were as well. It had a clear structure, a neutral view, and supporting references for all their information. Their body paragraphs were easy to read and I think summarized their topics well without being too overbearing on information. I also liked how they incorporated background information on different corporations that are involved in taking a green stance on aviation in the future.