User:Halihutch/Integration host factor/DyeMeg Peer Review

General info
Halihutch, Ggotschall, Mitch hoopes
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Halihutch/Integration host factor
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So far, the article draft is relevant and neutral. I would recommend looking to improve the flow of the writing so it can be clearer to read.

In the references section, the same article is added 3 times, which I recommend fixing for organizational purposes. Including more references will make the article more reputable and cohesive.