User:Hallekerickson/Glassybaby/Alesliemir Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Hallekerickson/Glassybaby


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hallekerickson/Glassybaby?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glassybaby

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Halle, compared to the original wiki article on Glassybaby, I saw that you added some information under the 'Locations' and 'Charitable giving' sections and created a new section for 'Craft or Product'. This specific section is an important one you added because of the relevance it presents to the history behind glassblowing. You did well in including the production and techniques of glassblowing that serve as a key element to what Glassybaby products are derived from. The content you included that displayed specified price listings for the types of Glassybabies was another useful detail you added to the article that I think also improved the quality of the wikipedia entry. I especially liked the symbolic meanings behind the style of the logo (triskelion) you included in the end of the draft.

You included a great amount of references that I think work well together in addressing each of these important details of Glassybabies. You listed a source on Glassybaby opening in the University Village location published in 2009. Although it is a fairly outdated source, it is still a beneficial reference since it covers the official opening of the brand's location in University Village, while also serving as evidence that the brand is growing in both popularity and demand. You also kept the content neutral and steered away from any bias. My only recommendation would be to add more information on the different types of Glassybabies, along with descriptions of different sizes/ distinct features/ colors? Overall, I think the draft included a lot of necessary information.