User:Hallekerickson/Glassybaby/Mhdav9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Hallekerickson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hallekerickson/Glassybaby


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glassybaby

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead looks great! Summarizes what will be talked about more later in the article and makes it easy to tell what glassybaby is.

As far as content goes, I would definitely add more to the history section. It looks like the original article had a bit about the creation of the idea and the founding which seems interesting to include -- particularly to tie it to the charitable side. I like that information was added to keep the article current (eg current President and new locations). I think the craft paragraph looks great as well! Maybe worth adding a bit more detail on the process of creation (eg temperature, time required, etc.) to give a better idea of why they're worth $60+.

Tone and sources look good to me.

The article definitely needs photos. A reference photo of a basic glassybaby as well as the triskellion. Maybe one of a warehouse or store.

Overall the additions really improve the article and make it more complete!