User:Halleparker/Sexual script theory/Arive060 Peer Review

General info
Halle Parker and her group
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Halleparker/Sexual script theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Halleparker/Sexual script theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that the sandbox as currently constructed right now is close to perfect for where we are at. They give in depth descriptions on how we have developed these sexual norms, and the actual affect that they can have on people. And while describing this, they go into the other areas that aren't the primary concern but need to be understood to grasp the main concept they're talking about. All in all I believe that they have probably the best foundation for the sandboxes thus far.