User:Halleparker/Sexual script theory/Declancohan Peer Review

General info
Halle
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Halleparker/Sexual_script_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sandbox draft looks great, information is laid out perfectly, very descriptive, and easy to read.