User:Hallermb/Vampire squid/Tmclaughlin80 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Gomescl


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hallermb/Vampire_squid?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Vampire squid

Evaluate the drafted changes
The author added relevant, up to date, and neutral information to the existing article that flows well with the information that is already there. The new information is cited correctly and improves the overall quality of the article by expanding on existing facts and details. The writing itself was done well and was relatively easy to understand, but some of the phrasing could be polished up for grammatical correctness and easier flow of sentences. Overall I would say the author did a great job in improving the article.