User:Hamzahab3/Gabe Davis/Noahsinc Peer Review

General info
Hamzahab3
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hamzahab3/Gabe_Davis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gabe Davis

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a very good start, with that being said I think their is somethings that you can add in. I think highlighting and adding more into why they called him "Big-Game Dave" would be a very good addition to this showing the person that is viewing the article why he was so good in high intensity situations. You could also add the certain plays that he made in those moments like a game winning catch or determinations to win in that particular game. Also possibly a little more information on his college career and what scouts were looking for him.