User:Hancun123/The rise of Esport in China/IDOSALSA101 Peer Review

General info
Hancun123
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hancun123/The rise of Esport in China - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):NA

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The Lead reflects the new content added by the peer. It includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic, as well as a brief description of the article's major sections. The Lead does not include any information that is not present in the article, and it is concise and not overly detailed.

Content

The content added by the peer is relevant to the topic and up-to-date. There is no content that is missing or that does not belong. The article does not deal with any of Wikipedia's equity gaps, but the peer has added a section on the popularity of esports among women in China, which is a historically underrepresented population.

Tone and Balance

The content added by the peer is neutral and does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another. I did not find any claims that appear heavily balanced towards any one position.

Sources and References

The draft has no citations and just two references. I think the peer should cite sources from which they drew their information from.

Organization

The draft is well-organized, with sections that reflect the major points of the topic. It provides a clear and concise information on the topic.

Images and Media

There are no images and/or media provided in the draft yet.

For New Articles Only

The article is not linked to other articles, nor does it have good reliable sources and citations. It has a good amount of information though which is well organized and concise.

Overall Impressions

The drafted is very well-written and informative. The information is relevant to the topic, up-to-date, and neutral in tone. The references used are reliable, but the draft needs citations and good sources. The content is also well-organized.