User:Handro19/Santa Clara valley aquifer/Shelbyyyw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jared Nunez

Handro19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Handro19/Santa_Clara_valley_aquifer?veaction=edit&preload=TemplateADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Santa Clara valley aquifer

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The only changes I saw were the 'History' section being revised some compared to the original article. I may be seeing this wrong, or maybe the edits were not all published? I don't think it would be a fair review without seeing more information to see what contributions are being made to the article. My biggest questions would be;

Are you trying to just improve the article information as a whole? or Are you trying to add sections to the article to expand it?

Not much has been posted yet to the main sandbox, but I do play on improving the page as a whole. I want to add more on the history while also the detail parts of the aquifer.