User:HandsomeSquidward311/Environmental privilege/Goondog101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HandsomeSquidward311


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HandsomeSquidward311/Environmental_privilege?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
-Clear and concise definition of the subject, stated in the first sentence of the first paragraph.

-Information is well thought out and easy to read

-Citations in the article need to be fixed- use the cite button at the top of the page so there is a live link to the reference article used

-Maybe add more sections, include present and future topics of environmental privilege.

-Break down the Background section- Include points about Covid in the present section