User:Hanel1203/sandbox

**** I published my article : The Korean Council for the Women Drafted for Military Sexual Slavery by Japan

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This is an excellent start! You already have a pretty good draft ready to go, once you fill in some of the missing sections. An imprtant topic, well described in this entry. Dwebsterbu (talk) 14:49, 17 February 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review 1
I am not sure you can cite other wikipidi'as pages because I don't know if they are reliable. You may want to ask the prof about that.

you may want to precise real quick who is Hirohito ?

aNY errors I saw I put strikes it and put in bold.

Other than that I couldn't find any else wrong about the article. It was clear and concise. Very good job!!

Léa Piernas

Peer Review 2
Great writing so far, excellent historic outline - very in depth. There needs to be an intro paragraph prior to the table of contents, nothing extreme but a few intro sentences. You also could benefit from going through your writing and hyperlinking a bunch of the terms to other wikipedia pages. Regarding the structure section, needs to be better organized - perhaps a table of sorts? Or simple increased spacing between a number of different paragraphs? Play around with the formatting to rework it. Very good activities section. Well done!

Aidan Cooke