User:Hanfino/Representative bureaucracy/Jameson.dimaio Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hanfino


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hanfino/Representative_bureaucracy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Representative bureaucracy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your additions to this article are very comprehensive and do a great job in covering the international aspects of representative bureaucracy that adds good understanding for the reader. The contribution does a good job in showing the importance this concept has in the role of developing nations and how this can help underserved minorities and gender disparities. I though the citing and source selection were overall very comprehensive with great citing and linking of outside websites to continue research from this article. The only problems I see with these additions is how to fit it into the overall article since it is so focused on representative bureaucracy within the United States. I didn't see any structure for that in the draft, so there's probably a plan for that. It looks like it would fit well under the History or U.S. levels of government so that would be my only recommendation. Other then the structure plan, I think this is a great addition to the original article!