User:Hanmar94/sandbox

LSU
Louisiana State University is where I go to school. I like it.

copywriting article
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Comfort_zone

First, I would fix the "contents" box because it has things in it that shouldn't be there. The language used is also very confusing, some of the grammar needs to be fixed. I would also change some of the wording because a lot of unnecessary words are being used when the sentences could be a lot simpler.
 * Approved. Another student already made some changes, but the article needs a lot of help. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:47, 7 February 2015 (UTC)