User:Hannah-Walton12/Pachydiplax longipennis/Kvboyette Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannah-Walton12


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Blue dasher


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The opening sentence of the lead of this article is indicative as to what the rest of the article will be about. The rest of the lead while very informative could be more concise as there is a lot of information that could be more appropriately presented later in another section of the article. In regards to the content of the article, more information about the lifestyle of this dragonfly could be added. The information in both the habitat and the diet sections are informative and important for the readers to understand as they reveal a lot about how the dragonfly loves its live, however, there is still not enough to really provided a well rounded picture of this species of dragon fly. The information included in this article is included in the cited articles and is accurate. More peer reviewed sources should be cited in order to provide the reader with more information about different aspects of the lifestyle of this dragonfly. The article is well organized. The biggest strength of the article is the lead because it provides the most and valuable information, though it could stand to be trimmed down a bit. Suggestions for more sections that could be added include reproduction, morphology, life cycle, range, etc.