User:Hannah.Leanne.Moore/Thomas Preston (British Army officer)/Bmduncan2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannah.Leanne.Moore


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannah.Leanne.Moore/Thomas_Preston_%28British_Army_officer%29/Bmduncan2_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hannah.Leanne.Moore/Thomas_Preston_%28British_Army_officer%29/Bmduncan2_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I believe you have put together a very well piece of information to add to your Wiki project. The work accurately reflects the work that has been cited. The content is backed up by sources. I did not pick up on any grammar errors. As far as I can tell, this is coming along nicely.