User:Hannah.hrm/Advertising campaign/A.Evanzz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hannah.hrm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hannah.hrm/Advertising campaign - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Advertising campaign - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really like the way that you went about adding the information to the edited sections. I think that the thing that really caught my attention was the wat that you worded the majority of your sections as it feels very impartial and like you are just disseminating information as opposed to attempting to convince someone of something. I think that one thing that could be added to your article could be a hyper link to another Wikipedia article about influencers if one exists because I think that this may be less accessible to some people especially if they are elderly or something of that nature. I think that the same could be said about the Effie Award because I personally do not know what that is and I think that it could be helpful to have an easier way to get that information. Aside from this I personally do not really understand what is meant by new ways to endorse influencers, but this may just be my own misreading of the sections around this phrase. I think that the information that you added really helps to modernize the information in the article and will make strong additions to the discussion. Overall, I would say that you did a very good job especially for creating two completely new paragraphs of information along with adding other information to the article.