User:Hannah.hrm/Advertising campaign/SamiB11 Peer Review

In reviewing Hannah.hrm's advertising campaign page, I have a couple points of feedback. I think the amount of information was good, I felt like there was enough context for the platforms that were being talked about in this article. The spacing and the words in bold were a bit confusing. I think it would flow better if the spaces were removed. There could also be some improvements when introducing a new paragraph and concluding it. I felt like it jumped around just a little bit instead of being a flowing explanation of advertising campaigns. I would have also love to learn about more examples or the work that goes into advertising campaigns. While I feel like the section on how social media influences and affects these campaigns, I think it would be useful to use an example or talk about the process. The integrated marketing communication section was interesting but it felt a little out of place so maybe providing some sentences leading up to the introduction of a new section would help it flow better. I think it could also be improved by talking about the ways in which this has altered other forms of campaigns. I felt like consumerism was touched in the sections but maybe adding some examples about elections and politics or research outlets or other things that are also campaigned digitally.

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