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Plans for Problematic Social Media Use:

This article's content is relevant to the social media overuse being a diagnosable addiction or condition. However, in the first sentence it references social media addiction and in the diagnosis section it relates symptoms to that of substance addiction. I believe 'problematic social media use' is drawn out and presents an opinion with the word "problematic," which has a subjective nature.

The Governmental response could be more developed because I believe more issues have risen with Covid-19 and children exercising problematic social media use. The article is written neutrally regarding the topic of social media having consequences of overuse to mental health. It is arguing that there are medical symptoms that mirror addiction to other substances. The diagnosis section is strongly supported by one reliable source, but it makes presents strong points. That could be expanded upon. The organization flows naturally as a page for a medical condition. For instance, a page like this would not start with a history section, but rather a signs and symptoms section because viewers are likely looking for an answer to their problems. The scales and measures section has validity to it and is sourced well, but doesn't expand on what each software did for social media addiction measurement. The social anxiety section and reference could be better related to the topic and not posed as a stand alone section; possibly needing a reference to a social anxiety wikipedia page.

Citations are reliable and plentiful, however many claims that contain factual evidence are not cited. The article was nominated for good article status, but did not meet criteria.

Plans for bibliography:


 * Dogan, H., Norman, H., Alrobai, A., Jiang, N., Nordin, N., & Adnan, A. (2019). A Web-Based Intervention for Social Media Addiction Disorder Management in Higher Education: Quantitative Survey Study. Journal of medical Internet research, 21(10), e14834. https://doi.org/10.2196/14834
 * Gao, J., Zheng, P., Jia, Y., Chen, H., Mao, Y., Chen, S., Wang, Y., Fu, H., & Dai, J. (2020). Mental health problems and social media exposure during COVID-19 outbreak. PLoS ONE, 15(4), 1–10. https://doi-org.gonzaga.idm.oclc.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0231924
 * Ball, J. (2018). Facebook’s next move. New Scientist, 238(3174), 24–25. https://doi-org.gonzaga.idm.oclc.org/10.1016/S0262-4079(18)30702-4